On Saturday i went to the game and i was watching the Moerewa tigers in the finals and they vs a them that was parity good but then the tigers won it was 20 something and 11 points my family opening a shop to sell food and we sold nachos and pancakes cookies a German cakes and more
Kia ora JJ. My name is Isaiah and I’m a year 7 at Paihia School. I really like your writing you have done about the Moerewa Tigers game. There are a bit of mistakes in your writing but I know what your trying to say. You also should add what team they vs but other then that it is great. Did you enjoy selling food to all the people? Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora JJ, my name is Rikki-Dean I am a year 7 student from Paihia School. I like this post because I like watching rugby games and I like the Morewa Tigers. This is a good piece of writing but there is some mistakes. The mistakes that you have made is spelling and the word that you spelt wrong is pretty and it is only little mistakes like this and they can be easily fixed if you get a learning buddy to check you blog post. Also were you cheering the rugby players on when they were running with the ball or did you scream at them when they got a try?
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Kia ora JJ, Noah here i am a year 7 student at Kawakawa primary school and i think you did really good in your free writing but Maybe next time you can add full stops and more writing but overall it’s a perfect piece of writing
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Sup JJ Ryker here ireally like your post about moerewa tigers finals because im rally fasanatid about rugby. i was going to go but i was sick
ReplyDeleteSup JJ hi its Jahkaya how was it i really like your post was it good there did you enjoy it there i had rugby but i went to soccer
ReplyDeleteKia ora, JJ my name is Isabella-paige im a year 7 in Te ngahere. I like your post about free writing about the tiger game in Moerewa. Wow that would of been fun watching the tigers winning my dad went to the game is well. What did you learn thought the game.
ReplyDeleteKia ora JJ my name is kieron and I really like you r free writing about the rugby game in moerewa I wonder who won.
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure I was there at the rugby game see you soon and check out my blog @https://kpskieronr.blogspot.com/