her is my free Writing for the week
in the weeken my cousin had a birthday we had it at the park in kawakawa town we were there for until lie night time we had fish and chips for launch and for diner we had brags and Fri chips i had a Compassion the park we had a money bar race we had a balancing compassion we had a Lot of fun
It sounds like you had a fantastic time at your cousins birthday, eating yummy kai and competing against your cousins. Maybe next time you could try to add some more descriptive language - what do you see, feel, hear, smell etc.
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