it was so hard to do my bee poetry but I finished it eventually. I was trying to learn how to use descriptive words. In first poem, I tried rhyming but it wasn't enough descriptive language so then I tried again then I came up with this poetry i feel good about this writing i hope you like it.
Wednesday, 28 August 2019
Monday, 10 June 2019
Free writing
On Monday me and all my family went to jump world for one hour and then we went to have a feed it was yam after that we went to the park and had some ice cream and then my dad went to go play basketball at the i went to the skate park me and my brother went to go by the big ramp an there were 4 people on.
Wednesday, 5 June 2019
The scratch project
On Monday 27th of May me and my friend Hirini made a scratch the easy part was the making the background the hard part was to put all of the action in it.
Monday, 13 May 2019
mother day
mothers day
on mothers day my dad made some pancakes they were so good my mum had some and then she went to the church to have some more breakfast for mothers day my little sis Fineone went with my auntie and me and my staid and clean up the house with my dad and in 1 hour it was clean and then 2 hour after that mum came home.
on mothers day my dad made some pancakes they were so good my mum had some and then she went to the church to have some more breakfast for mothers day my little sis Fineone went with my auntie and me and my staid and clean up the house with my dad and in 1 hour it was clean and then 2 hour after that mum came home.
Monday, 8 April 2019
free write
my week was so cool my cousin turns 25 we went to kingwa in paihia and we code have anything so i just go some chocolate moos for desert and for diner i had some eggs and some pork and a drunk we played at the beach and got some thing from the shop to get some ice blocks i had a chocolate and so we went to the moves and we watched wreck-it Ralph 2 and after that we had a swim at the beach for 1 hour then we went home and grid up and sat in bed to get worm and then we went to town to the park i went on the swing i went on the slid and on the rock climb and on the monkey bars .
Monday, 18 March 2019
my cousin
this is my writing to day
my cousin likes to do the ps4
his best friend is James
his name is bt
his mum is lean
his brother is jony
Monday, 11 March 2019
free writing
her is my free Writing for the week
in the weeken my cousin had a birthday we had it at the park in kawakawa town we were there for until lie night time we had fish and chips for launch and for diner we had brags and Fri chips i had a Compassion the park we had a money bar race we had a balancing compassion we had a Lot of fun
in the weeken my cousin had a birthday we had it at the park in kawakawa town we were there for until lie night time we had fish and chips for launch and for diner we had brags and Fri chips i had a Compassion the park we had a money bar race we had a balancing compassion we had a Lot of fun
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