Monday 10 June 2019
Free writing
On Monday me and all my family went to jump world for one hour and then we went to have a feed it was yam after that we went to the park and had some ice cream and then my dad went to go play basketball at the i went to the skate park me and my brother went to go by the big ramp an there were 4 people on.
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Kia Ora JJ, my name is Mark. I’ve been reading your blog about Free Writing, it looks like a good story. I love your writing because whenever I’m bored I always read blog posts and this is the best writing ever. When you said you went to the skate park, it reminded me of when I got my first bike. I was about 5 years old when I got it. Have you been to the skatepark in Australia?
ReplyDeleteKia ora JJ. My name is Isabella-Paige. I go to Paihia School and I am in Te Ngahere.
ReplyDeleteI went onto your blog and saw your-free writing. I like your post on Monday . You’re so lucky because I've always wished to go to Jump World. You’re also so lucky because you got to go with your brother to the skate park it would of been fun going down the big ramp. What’s your favourite ice cream?
Kia ora JJ my name is Angela I am a year 6 student, I go to Paihia School and I am in Te Ngahere. I went onto your blog because I saw Free Writing and I wanted to read your blog post. I liked reading your blog post because it was very interesting and you told us what you did and where you went. Maybe next time you could add commas and don't add as much ands, other then that your story was very cool. I remember when I went to Jump World for my cousins 1st birthday and 5th birthday and you were there. I also remember when I was in the big round clear balls with my cousin lysharn, Bailey & you and we were pushing each other around everywhere. What's your favourite thing to do at jump world? mine is the big round clear balls. If you want to check out my blog
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Ka Kite!